Poor Imp

First of all, Thank You So Much!!! I've been a wreck waiting for someone to reply to my story. And I know its not the best but thanks alot for ...

a gryphon? I'd thought he was a shark. And are those stereos - of some sort, blasting music around him? Or like Fish asks, dominoes? IMP

Hey Pol. ^_^ It looks as if you've got a tale innately full of action; and a place to put it. Khor certainly looks hyperactively precocious enough to set things ...

I've gotten fond of Constable; and I love his cloud, though I'd never want to take it from him. ^_~ He wouldn't quite be Constable without it, and it wouldn't ...

I preferred its previous look, really - looks off-kilter now, somehow.

It's a neat image, altogether. There's something definitively '20's about her glance and expression. But she seems painfully off-balance on that stool. I've never seen a human being balance with ...

'Lo Write Me. It seems you haven't even got a 'hey! like, so cool!' remark on this. ^_^'' Anyhow, that's rotten. I've only skimmed the first piece. But you have ...

Well, this is a discussion thread for the jolly old pirates and chaps of the Royal Navy. EDIT: A link to the actual story thread -- Piracy IMP

Ach, DD, I'm well served for posting the feint Presque Vu link. I did think, almost, you'd posted here... !_! ^_^'' IMP

If I had thoughts on pudding, I'd be one of Frick's fruitcakes, da? ...been drinking what? -Tov Pudding? Bloody hell, thoughts on pudding? -Piers It's food, isn't it? Denver's men ...

NM -- don't worry about it, by any means. IF you get more critiques with the same thoughts, just take them as confirmation that when you get to it, those ...

No need of doing it immediately . Think it over and when you're ready to keep writing, go over the first bit and touch it up before you go on ...

I know it can be hard to get up the courage to post something, especially when it feels close to you still. But usually, even the the writers who have ...

Welcome to YWS, Kat. ^_^ It is a brilliant place for writing and such; for word games and great community. Noticeably, I'm Imp - a moderator. ^_^ Oy, if you've ...

okay. is it a little better then before? It's very slightly neater, NM. But it hasn't changed much at all. As Meep has noted, it needs quite a bit of ...